There were a few English mistakes in the translation. But I think if you keep practicing you'll do even better.
It might be wise to have a native English speaker proofread your translation to catch any errors.
But keep up the good work! Thanks for translating! (●'◡'●)
(if you want, I can proofread it when I'm free)
The art is alright, but I'm genuinely disturbed by whatever makes the writer think that the story is good. It seems like revenge porn. I imagine someone writing this thinking they've been wronged and wishing they'll become this clever hero who gets revenge on the wrongdoers. The main character is no hero though. Her actions show she's just as nasty as every other character.
I normally try to stay positive and not write negative things, but there's something about this manga that chills and disturbs me.
Omg, you guys need to re-read the manga yo understand it but the storyline is really good because it keeps you on your feet. Please give it a second chance and download manga toon for more chapters
In the midst of this sadness, I'm like "let me do something good now before I fall into a pit of despair", so does anyone know where to support the author?
JUST LET HER TALK TO THE DAMN PUPPIES