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There were a few English mistakes in the translation. But I think if you keep practicing you'll do even better.
It might be wise to have a native English speaker proofread your translation to catch any errors.
But keep up the good work! Thanks for translating! (●'◡'●)
(if you want, I can proofread it when I'm free)
JUST LET HER TALK TO THE DAMN PUPPIES