BEST yoi Dj, hands down. The author perfectly captures yuri's and victor's personality, their mannerisms, and makes their thoughts and actions seem very likely to happen. I loved every second of this.
Aaaand it's still marked as incomplete so we can hope for more, right? I love the dynamics in this!
BEST yoi Dj, hands down. The author perfectly captures yuri's and victor's personalities, their mannerisms, and makes their thoughts and actions seem very likely to happen. I loved every second of this.
I love shun just as much as the next guy, but after reading chapter 8, I'm growing tired of how long shun's sex issue is being drawn out. (it's been something he and mio have dealt with since Umibe.) not only that, but his behavior is just all over the place and it's so hard to sit through!
mio's also starting to act vague, and the author even points it outs on one panel in ch 8, so it's definitely intentional. but it doesn't seem to "flow" as well as Umibe did. it gives me the impression that there wasn't as much thought put into the portrayal of whatever mental struggle shun may be going through. rather than "real" or "raw", things are starting to just seem muddy and directionless. there are too many loose strings... it almost feels like the author is depicting too much of the everyday and not enough character development. I mean, this is still a story, and I doubt there will be many volumes left...
the dialogue and interactions between shun and mio have been so ambiguous. they both just don't seem to make much sense. and while they do exchange a few words here and there, they never try to seek out the root of the problem (whatever that may be). and it's getting kind of monotonous. like, when is the author going to pick up the pace? fumi is adorable and all, but wouldn't the writing be better if there was slightly more focus on the main characters and their personal problems?
i mean, the art is gorgeous and both shun and mio are as lovable as can be. I've really enjoyed the fluffy chapters of them just being cute. but their relationship as a whole isn't being fleshed out well in my opinion. and I hate to admit that I feel that way, because I really do love this manga and its author. I wonder if anyone else is getting the same vibe as me...
I agree. Ive just read the 8 chapter and Im flustrated and confused. I adore this manga and this author but it seems that the author is trying to make long the story by complicating their relationship with things that are vague and have not purpose.
The sex thing has not sense to me, Shun doesnt joy sex itself or is it because he is not a bottom but he do it because of Mio because he believe that he wouldnt like because he is straight? And they dont talk and when they do it its senseless
it does seem like the author is just trying to lengthen the story. but instead of adding to the plot, it's just slowing it down imo.
I agree, their communication really isn't good. some authors don't like using much dialogue, which is fine because they compensate with inner monologue. but in this case, the readers aren't getting enough of that either, so I feel somewhat lost...
Yeah. I know that to make good a story you have to keep some things but making it too cryptic tire over time. Shun has issues and Mío try to make him talk about but he dont push enough either so..well even so I think its one of the greatest BL mangas.
Unhh Ive just realized of a lot of grammar mistakes. Sorry my english is very poor. "he doesnt" not "don't", "Mío is trying" not "try"
don't worry about it, you're English is actually pretty strong! (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
despite the flaws, this will always be one of my top five BL. Let's hope the author clears things up in the next chapters...
I love the baker, he's SO CUTEEEEEEE (≧∀≦)
But I really, REALLY hope he doesn't hurt sun hwa. *interlocks fingers* pls yaoi gods! Pls send him more dick than malice
(⌒▽⌒) omg your comment