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Oh boy... I admit, I've been defending our FL a lot. She's got trauma, has PTSD, is lost and alone in a new world where she doesn't speak the language. It's understandable that she doesn't always think clearly and acts impulsively. But... I just can't anymore.

The past two chapters have been brain-meltingly stupid. How she had the thought "maybe this is just an Inn. He seems honourable and he's been treating me well so far", yet still goes back to the conclusion that he's trying to sell her, is beyond me.

Her actions, as well, make no sense. She could've just opened the door and run out, but instead she decides to assault her "captor".
She's not even sure, and is having doubts to whether or not he has malicious intent. And if he did, the option of assaulting him seems way more risky than just running away while he's distracted.
Wtf.

Also, if she's so hellbent on the idea that he is trying to harm her, why would she still want to follow him and cling onto him when he leaves the room?
Like, author please. At least have your characters be consistent.

I just don't know where this is going, so I think I'll be putting this story on hold for now...

Why do they always have to know each other from somewhere in the past? What's wrong with meeting new people?

I wonder what cliché they are going for, then. Childhood friends that got separated? Old classmates where one of them had a crush on the other? An incident where they met in passing and the FL saved the ML in some way, or gave him some "life changing" advice?

Argh! Is it really too much to ask for a bit of originality in your smut manga?! Is it???
Lol, JK. Ofc it ain't gonna be original. It's a smut.

There's one thing about this story that bothers me in particular (aside from the ML's last name almost being "wrinkle") and that's the fact that Ash buys her in the beginning.

I understand that he just wants to ensure her freedom and safety, but his manner of doing so just perpetuates the problem.
Her ex-husband learned NOTHING, except that his cruelty, selfishness and unempathetic actions will eventually be rewarded.
He absused his wife for years and then sold her to the highest bidder, leaving her to potentially suffer hell all over again, yet he gets away scot free. Scot free AND rich.

Ig it's entirely realistic, it just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Shit like that happens all the time in real life, so it kinda sucks to see it in fiction too. Idk

What just happened? The translation was so bad I only understood half of what they were saying...

The images of the latest chapter are out of order abd it's really confusing to read... （￣へ￣）

At this point, the only one I find an acceptable love interest is deer-boy.
The ML is super boring and the blonde prince is gigantic ass.

I know it will never happen, but I just want a love story with an ultra soft boi (づ￣ ³￣)づ

So... I'm a bit behind on this story. I last left it when Yona was conned into presenting to the people like she was the King's fiancée. Meanwhile, she was restricted from seeing Hak and the dragons.

So, can anyone spoil me: Has there been any development between Yona and Hak since then?

Oh boy, Ch. 41 was the final straw for me and I'm gonna drop this now.

I know lots of people dream about a grand, fateful love - "the one" that will make us happy - but stubbornly clinging on to the first person you fell in love with, like Linox does, is not healthy.
If you need to kidnap someone in order for them to spend time with you, you need to let go - not actually through with the kidnapping.
Go see a mental health professional, son. This ain't the way.

As for Amy, goooooooood...! I just wanna smack her.
No one gets to decide what makes someone else happy. Linox told her over and over what would make him happy, yet she refuses to listen and stubbornly clings on to the notion that she knows his needs and wants better than himself. Which is stupid and arrogant.
When she doesn't listen to him, her "self-sacrifice" just comes across as a shallow attempt at playing matyr in order to make herself feel better, and I can't stand it.

The author clearly wanted a dramatic love story, but with each new complication I just get more of the feeling that these two shouldn't be together.
If you wanna draw out a love story that's not very interesting on its own, it usually works better to let the surroundings and/or circumstances be the separating factor, rather than the character's stupidity.
At least that's my opinion.

I already don't like the premise...
I've read enough stories about FL's who were neglected and/or abused bc of their thoughtless husbands, to know what's coming.
It will probably be revealed that the ML loved the FL all along, but some misunderstanding or trauma caused him to act cold towards her. But I call BULLSHIT on those excuses.

Bc the "misunderstanding" is never the root of the problem, that caused the first timeline to end in tragedy. No, the reason is that the ML didn't realise that his position as a man, noble, leader and husband is one of privilege. His actions forms the basis for his wife's life; whether she will be respected or disregarded, be cherished or neglected, be served or spend her life in servitude.

He has no regard or compassion for his wife's feelings or circumstance.
If, in the first timeline, he had just spent a minute to think about how his words sound or how his actions can be interpreted by her and others, she wouldn't have had to experience the abuse and neglect in the first place.
One could argue that he simply didn't know how his actions affected her and that he didn't have the sense to understand or predict it. But even that is an empty excuse, bc he could've found out if he simply asked her, spent time with her or checked up on her. Just ONCE during their TEN years together.

Imo, there are no excuses for his behaviour. His wife was completely at his mercy and as a man of privilege, HE SHOULD KNOW THAT. Even if he lacked common sense and empathy, that much should be obvious. Yet he still spoke and acted like he did and made his wife MISERABLE.

I think it's great that our FL gets a second chance - she deserves it. But he doesn't.
The fact that she has to go through hell, be executed and DIE, return to the past and then SHE has to do the work of two people to fix their communication problems, so they won't both die or live in misery, is just infuriating.
If she has to make those sacrifices and then spend the effort to teach him how to, maybe, become a decent husband, it just means that he wasn't worth it in the first place.

Run away from that bastard, please. He doesn't deserve you.

Hahahaha
He's so innocent that he doesn't understand how what he said could be misunderstood