IM SORRY- BUT WHY DOES THE TIP LOOK LIKE ITS INFECTED!!!! ITS SO RED! IS THAT PHYSICALLY POSSIBLE??????
Idk why but I got the biggest ick when he said "Your mine" and just took the biggest chomp on the nape. Like, Bro have me a whole watermelon vibe when he said that Brotha EUGHHHH!!!!!
Bbg I need you to take a nice long bath and realize your the delulu one here!! pPLEASEEEEEEE I CANT STAND THIS MISUNDERSTANDING WHEN ITS SO EASILY ABLE TO BE TALKED OUT WITH!!!! PLEASE
This wasn't good enough. I NEED MORE PLEASEEEEEEE MAKE A LONGER VERSION!!! IM BEGGINNNNG!!! AJCOQOBCIWSAKNS
Bro if I could ask for any relationship it's this one. It's got everything a person could want in a healthy relationship, theyre not perfect but they're caring and they listen and that's what a good relationship always needs and should have!
13/10! Will be reading again!!
PLEASE WHAT IS THIS TRANSLATION!! I'm waiting for the Actual Translators to come back.
Also BRO YOU CAN NOT FUCK THAT PUP! PLEASEE
Bro Idk why but Pinkie pisses me off. Actually I think i just hate Bratty Ukes in general. I try to find BLs without them but it's such a common troup in Trios/ poly BLs. Siiiigh
I'm gonna bomb the creator if I don't see them damn babies or the wedding ceremony. (This is a joke...maybe) LOLOLOL
Bro I be thinking the same shit dude, I actually can't tell you how funny this episode is like oh my god it's actually the most relatable chapter by far!
This should've been longer. The chase should've happened instead of a single "im sorry" It was so pathetic and weak too. Like come on man
WHEN DID THESE STORIES GET SO UNCENSORED???? IM ALL FOR IT BUT I LAIGH EVERYTIME I SEE A RED ROCKET LILE?!?! AHAHAH I CANT BREATHE EVERYTIME! AND HIS DICK IS SO STRIAGHT LOOKING??? LIKE- HELP?!?!
UGH VERCION GET TF OUT!!! I HATE YOU!!! GHAAAAAAA YOUR MY BIGGEST OPP I SWEAR YOU ARE RUINING EVERYTHINF YOU STUPID CUNT!!!!
UGH VERCION GET TF OUT!!! I HATE YOU!!! GHAAAAAAA YOUR MY BIGGEST OPP I SWEAR YOU ARE RUINING EVERYTHINF YOUS TUPID CUNT!!!!
This story is for the most part okay.
Plot:6/10 (Unclear about what happens to Viktor)
Characters: 8/10 (Decent well written, the devil is how you expect the devil to act)
Smut: 7/10 (Wtf are those dicks, they're a weapon wtf)
Ending:4/10 (Only because we only ever see what Evan goes threw and not Seeing Viktors point of view)
Over all: 7.4/10
I read this when it was still publishing, But not that I reread it I'm still like "wtf" but At this point I'm more just "How is he not dead" because ik the human a-hole can't stretch like almost 3 times it's size but there's no way he shouldn't be that okay. Also THE INDEGESTION FROM ALL TNAG CUM HELLO??
YESSSSSSS OMGGGG this was what I've been waiting for! I'm all for the angst but when they finally regain EVERYTHING it just makes me so happy
Bro I used to read this when I SHOULDNT HAVE BEEN! and I'm just looking at it now like "Oh my god this is illegal as fuck!" WHAT MADE ME THINK THIS WAS A GOOD STORY??
THIS WAS DROPPED?!?! ARE YOU KIDDING ME!! I HAVENT TOUCHED THIS THING IN OVER 9 MONTHS AND I FIND OUT ITS **CANCLED!!!** THIS WAS THE ONLY BL THAT I FOUND THAT FIT EVERY THING I LOVED AND ITS GONE!!!