Ok the plot seems really rushed and doesn't make much sense i dont know if its because the first 2 chapters were a mess or if the story itself is badly written. The plot of her braking the glass bottle with the important liquid inside makes no sense its just used as a cheap way to make the female lead indebted to Zion. The female lead seems to already have feelings for Zion???????? She literally said i care about you when they were talking about Zion's stepmother, GIRL HUH?? You barely know the dude and you already "care about him". Also i feel like the author is already trying too hard to make Zion into a "tragic character", the way he said that his father cheated on his mother and the way that the female lead responded to that was so overdramatic that i kinda laughed. Anyways that is my opinion no hate to the story or the people that like it.
Duuuuuudeeeee i see yall simping for her dad *i mean rightfully so* but yall are sleeping on the teacher when i saw him in the beginning of the chapter i started barking, blond with blue eyes and incredibly fucking smart I NEED A MAN LIKE THAT IN MY LIFE
Istg imma throw hands with this black magic witch bitch who keeps getting in between them, READ THE ROOM AND GO STEAL SOMEONE ELSE'S MAN THE KING IS OURS
Ok the plot seems really rushed and doesn't make much sense i dont know if its because the first 2 chapters were a mess or if the story itself is badly written. The plot of her braking the glass bottle with the important liquid inside makes no sense its just used as a cheap way to make the female lead indebted to Zion. The female lead seems to already have feelings for Zion???????? She literally said i care about you when they were talking about Zion's stepmother, GIRL HUH?? You barely know the dude and you already "care about him". Also i feel like the author is already trying too hard to make Zion into a "tragic character", the way he said that his father cheated on his mother and the way that the female lead responded to that was so overdramatic that i kinda laughed. Anyways that is my opinion no hate to the story or the people that like it.