Is it a crime if I say I thought all the rape was... really unnerving? I think the Author is a weirdo.
The premise is decent, but... (￣∇￣") I really can't help but ask if this story wasn't just a weird way for the author to vent their issues...
I mean I get the point but I believe it’s more like the author is just trying to put the mc through the worst situation that they can think of so that the ml can save him since that’s sort of the plot and at least it’s not between him and the love interest
The art was so fire (≧∀≦)
I agree with the overwhelming story critiques, but wasn't the female lead kinda fire? I think hating her was the point of her character. Her entire arc is that she has no reason to do what she did, she was blinded by her unrealistic desire for love, which is why her character seems so poorly written.
But totally agree that the stories w/ the youtuber was unnecessary. Loved the idea she truly liked him, but the rich guy? Didn't really get the plot there.... I think the author tried to go too heavy in the lore for a short story.
Calling my son a slur rn, I can't believe he didn't give us a single kiss. Your mother is disappointed.
I feel like just... explaining "Yeah, bro is super duper traumatized from the car crash. I think he forgot everything. Since we were friends back then/I was there I feel really bad and wanna help him readapt"
... like you just gonna let him look insane those first few days???
Maybe there's a cultural stigma I don't get cause I'm American or maybe it's plot convenience idk. (づ￣ ³￣)づ
THISS
Like the whole plot point against the girl could have been avoided IF SHE SIMPLY SAID HE LOST HIS MEMORY. It wouldn't be strange or a lie. THEN she could have left him to other people so she can focus on her own things. But alas, the story must be interesting. (It reminds me of a diff one with a purple haired villainess possessing the author)
I hope the ML is the red haired dude. He seems to be popping up randomly and would fit better than a Duke who may leave at any point. Especially since the og dude already liked someone and they had something going on.
Praying to the Lord we get a death to the villianess (I think that's the novel?) where the ML gets his own body in the og universe
The story is so cliche/fast it hurts ！Σ(￣□￣;)
... but that's not a bad thing if you're in for the fun of it like me tho (*≧з≦)
Does anyone have recs for similar stories ? (〃´ω`〃)
WAR IS OVER!!!
NO MORE INCEST! NO MORE INCEST! NO MORE INCESTTTTTT ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Yayyyy!
There are still the twins....
We have to remain hopeful (〜￣△￣)〜 if they can do it once, they can do it thrice!!!! ヾ(☆▽☆)
Spoiler(?) For the Demon Lord and Hero
The way the ending of the Do and Hero in their past life don't add up in the beginning and final revelation is a bit confusing but it's my only complaint
W story! You can tell that the author was writing with the flow, but I could honestly care less as a passionately unpicky reader
It can be underwhelming/feel too short but a nice story to read when you're bored at night <3
6/10!!!! (≧∀≦)
(Ignore the fact I literally reviewed the story in the comment section like a weirdo.)
IS THE SERIES OVER????? (￣∇￣")
Btw SPOILERS
Did anyone else also expect more drama before Slyvia falling in love? Like "will you marry me" guy was fr a throwaway to cause tension
Started screaming (づ￣ ³￣)づ I need my husband so bad (thank God he's back in his original body, him being in yuseong's pissed me off.)