FuckPromos want to read (All 31)
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The art was so fire (≧∀≦)
I agree with the overwhelming story critiques, but wasn't the female lead kinda fire? I think hating her was the point of her character. Her entire arc is that she has no reason to do what she did, she was blinded by her unrealistic desire for love, which is why her character seems so poorly written.
But totally agree that the stories w/ the youtuber was unnecessary. Loved the idea she truly liked him, but the rich guy? Didn't really get the plot there.... I think the author tried to go too heavy in the lore for a short story.
Is it a crime if I say I thought all the rape was... really unnerving? I think the Author is a weirdo.
The premise is decent, but... (￣∇￣") I really can't help but ask if this story wasn't just a weird way for the author to vent their issues...
I mean I get the point but I believe it’s more like the author is just trying to put the mc through the worst situation that they can think of so that the ml can save him since that’s sort of the plot and at least it’s not between him and the love interest