
For the love of God, why can't they just talk??? One type of plot I hate is not communicating with each other
His dad thing is ok, it's family shit and from their relationship I understand why wanting to keep it secret but this??? Something that can fuck both of them, he already saw what shit these people can do, what does he think he's capable of doing in this situation?? Not only can this guy fake pictures or whatever to make it pass like cheating, to being literally SA if they meet alone
Sorry, this is just stupid for me

Like, I'm really liking the story and all but it really bother me that he is so young ╥﹏╥
Not that it's ok this kinda of relationship but if he was like 15-16 years, it would be so much better in my perspective
I'm not trying to shit in the story, just something that makes me not fully enjoy it, I don't see nothing bad about how they're interacting right now, but... it's just an icky you know?

But they bring those things, I know he's mentally 21 years old, but make he think about a time when they were having sex (which was a very vulnerable moment and I liked how they talked about the older guy past experiences) and he thinks the older guy is sexy a few times already, you see, it's those little details that makes me a little icky, I'm glad it's all from the MC perspective (even if it had that "dream" when the older guy thinks about kissing the MC when he's 21 years)
Like I said, I'm liking this story and if their relationship continues like this, I'll still read it but it makes me think about how it'll play for them to be together at the end

Why everytime they will reveal something is there a problem?
Like with himself before "oh you can ask me anything and I'll need to answer" *ask something* "Sorry, I can't answer that"???? Now this, oh let's move to somewhere so we can talk... two seconds later something is already Interrupting, for that love of God just say something ( ̄∇ ̄")
"I see no temples"
Oh fuck off, they just finish a war, didn't have money to even feed themselves but of course the first thing a person who wasn't affected at all by it and didn't even though of praying for the dead ones would think upon seeing their situation is that they don't have a temple