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Candy probs ded TT
Compare Chanil's first appearance with his last... he looks so different it's chilling. Remember when the story was about Skylar stalking him lol
Tbh maybe it's because it's been a while since I haven't re-read the story, but I don't see where we're going, like wth is happening even? It's like, everything was going well and then BOOM all problems arise at the same time and it's like you don't even know what to look at. Either nothing happens or everything happens all at once. Cirrus gets thrown out of his house, thdn he and Skylar beat each other up, then he deals with the homophobic bullies, then Candy dies and Chanil's going psycho. Mind you this all happened in 4 chapters or so. There's more happening in these 4 chaps than in the last 20 chapters lol