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Stuck in My Sister's Dating Sim

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• Author: Mongdo
• Genres: Fantasy / Romance / Shounen Ai / Webtoons

The sister sucks, the story had potential then went down the drain. The author needs to go back to school. The initial idea was interesting but it seems they didn’t have an actual pre written story or plan and they just make shit up as they draw it. They basically ignore the SA and create the most annoying character which is the sister which in all honesty seems like a self projection of the author.

Form of Broken Love

- Yunho, don't cry... It pains me to see you cry...Yunho is a ceramics student who just returne...

• Author: Namol,Lala , Team Namollala
• Genres: Drama / Romance / Slice Of Life / Smut / Yaoi

Something is deeply wrong with the Korean community and sexual relationships and acts being carried out with no love, there are so many new stories coming out of non consensual sexual acts being written and then drawn. Even the fans who support this type of genre seem delusional in their own arguments, but the difference between a hentai Internet site with specific tags that a person with a problem would have to actively seek out and these types of stories being made more and more often is that this is on just an ordinary BL tag, even on official webtoon sites it’s being advertised rather than seemed out. There’s warnings which is fine, but if the story has warnings of criminal sexual acts being carried out then why is it so easily available to click on, on an official webtoon website in less than two swipes it will show up. Then again, why is there such a large audience vocally asking for these types of porn with plot? At this point it’s not a romance story with some adult imagery, it’s just porn, and I’ve seen these types of stories even publically advertised on billboards because if there’s an audience there are people with money who will just pay for a lot to show off their niche interests. It’s concerning that even some of the own people who read this type of crap don’t even know that the actions happening are not morally right, they just find it more racy and stimulating than average that they become desensitized. This is similar to porn addiction within teenage boys, and they’ve realized that it’s a problem. I’ll just end this off by saying that this porn story wasn’t for me, it disgusted me. But those who ask for it are welcome to read it and enjoy it. I just hope they don’t paste the characters onto a billboard for a “birthday pop up” in a public space advertising nonconsensual sex, and in this story’s case, abuse as well. All because the characters were depicted hot. Do it in private and acknowledge you have a problem for consuming and seeking this kind of content. But please I hope this trend of morally deprived stories end, and those who still enjoy this kind of horrible content keep it to themselves because it’s not normal.

Tit For Tat

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• Author: 水千丞
• Genres: Webtoons / Shounen Ai / Drama / Psychological

Don’t waste your time, I think the only thing the creator can do is draw pretty men hug each other. The story is shit and the translators who can’t even commit to translating the shit story is even worse. What’s so bad about it? Yuan Yang rapes Mr.Gu and you’d think a character written to be very smart makes stupid decisions for the sake of more fucking, what’s laughable is that the artist doesn’t even draw them fucking lmao. This story just exists to exist, at least I know now that the person who wrote this finds drugging someone and raping them infront of a camera is romantic, if anyone enjoys this story they’re just as bland and easy to please as the characters in this story.

Escape, Ray

For Kyle, it’s just a normal day at work until Lou walks in. Tall, blond and dashing, he&rsquo...

• Author: Gonwoo
• Genres: Shounen Ai / Fantasy / Webtoons / adult

The Seme is an ass hole, if you’re reading hoping for the twins to be happy together and heal drop it now because when Ray wakes up he moves to another city leaving Kile with Lou. Edith gets captured, Asher retires from the Bureau yadayadayada. It’s not a satisfying ending at all. Lou has been a complete asshole to Kile, had sex with him because he looked like his twin, Kile suffers and gets everyone’s anger taken out on him because his twin brother is dead. All Kile does is forgive and forgive and at the end of the story, he doesn’t even care to be with his brother anymore, he wants to make Lou (who used him as Ray’s replacement) feel better for being an asshole. Does anyone really care about Ray? Or Kile? Or do the two of them just have to accept how shit they’ve been treated because of how selfish everyone in this story is. Lou’s love for Kile doesn’t even make any sense because I thought the whole thing was that he went batshit crazy for a year because of Ray, now that Ray is awake and alive suddenly Lou likes Kile? But before Ray died it was suggested in the flash backs that him and Lou were in a relationship but when Lou goes to find a solution for Ray to escape Edith, Ray has sex with Asher? Mhm, the plot is all over the place, the ending was predictable in the worst way possible and all the characters who sucked in the beginning still suck after 80 chapters. One star and shove it up your ass so you don’t waste your time.

I’m wasting my time commenting my thoughts on stories that won’t even take the criticism, yet I felt so strongly to comment because of how bad it was. Can we make standards a thing again?

Spring is Near

He Wei originally used to live a peaceful life in a small sleeping town, with a more than lovers fri...

• Author: 尉迟金泽
• Genres: Shounen Ai / Webtoons

This is my first time commenting on a story, but I’ve related to the main character so much I felt the need to comment how I felt. The story does a good job remembering to keep it realistic yet since it’s ongoing I can’t help but feel the characters are living in such an outdated mindset. Qiu Rang, is he mentally ill? His parents died from an airplane so yes he can be very clingy to his Ge. Many stories justify the weird obsession with their personality just being very possessive by nature, but Qiu Rang also can’t understand basic human emotions and boundaries. Even being pampered very well as a kid, said individual can still grow up with knowledge of right and wrong, and Qiu Rang’s Ge as seen in the story does scold Qiu Rang to learn right and wrong from childhood. So why does he still not grasp human decency besides the author needing a second love interest? He Wei growing up in such a suffocating family and lack of parental love, no one to scold him right and wrong yet he is the person in the story who has the most empathy for others? Yet the author chose to continue to hurt He Wei by making his little brother attempt to rape him multiple times, yes the author made him do that because it makes no sense for an actual person with a sane mind to do that, if we argue the author isn’t making Qiu Rang do it then we can conclude that the author wrote Qiu Rang as a mentally ill character. So, mentally ill or not, I cannot find myself to have any sympathy for someone to constantly be selfish and harm others for the sake of their own happiness, no matter how cute they draw Qiu Rang or how desperate he looks for his Ge to look at him. He stole He Wei’s fathers attention from him to be sick, yet Qiu Rang just wanted He Wei to look at him. He is Bai Lin’s crush, yet the author had He Wei have a crush on Bai Lin. Qiu Rang does things to so desperately have He Wei look at him yet fails to see that he hurt He Wei so much that his desperation fails to make me feel any sympathy. I had hope for Bai Lin, a seemingly mature character that is smart, always thinking ten steps ahead, yet the author chose to make this wise character less than what he could actually be. Is the morale of this story the consequence of blinding love? Modernly majority can agree blinding love is toxic, Bai Lin who could have been one of He Wei’s support is instead a character creating an unrealistic plan to use He Wei of his own gain to have Qiu Rang only rely on him. Has He Wei done something so unbelievably bad in his past life? Does a good person no longer exist the moment they are born with a silver spoon? I want to skip every chapter about these two, they don’t know what consequences are, they don’t actually care about anyone but themselves, how could I want to read about them falling in love, having a good ending. Even karma isn’t something I would read about, because they’ve already done so many wrongs yet He Wei is written to be so forgiving, when in reality it takes such a strong person to revisit such a traumatic place again and again. But for the sake of a love story, He Wei’s feelings are overlooked more than they should be. The story is so unnecessarily toxic it’s frustrating. There is no argument, He Wei is the one who suffers the most. I’m on chapter 71, He Wei and the one only good character Wan Jun are together, they have clarity of their feelings together and He Wei realized he never had feelings for Bai Lin, and finally stood up against Qiu Rang. That is where I’m allowing myself to drop this story, that should be the end of the story. I hope the author learned a lot about how to write characters while working on this story. It’s not completely awful, but compelling enough for me to say that it desperately needs better character writing. What’s good is that the art is beautiful, He Wei learns that he actually has rights, and Wan Jun is exactly what He Wei needs. That’s all the good things, and don’t make me bring up the horrible age gap they both have during the story. Even the main couple has horrible issues that are over looked that reflects on poor writing that ends up being very distasteful to read.
Three stars, I won’t give it anything higher if anything I think three stars was heavily carried by the beautiful art and how committed the author was for continuing to make every character unlikeable.

Master's Pet

When Ein is brought in to the Marquess Howard’s manor, he finds himself serving TWO masters. U...

• Author: Shroomi
• Genres: Yaoi / Romance / Webtoons

There hasn’t been many Royalty full color yaoi that has decent art, this story does a great job with that. The story is cliché with the slave and master troupe, the author tried to make it realistic when it comes to a complete ending, and because of how porn like the plot has become, the realistic ending felt rushed. It’s a good smut, but so much sex over shadowed an actual story, and sometimes it’s fine to have just straight up porn. The problem is how the author still tried to make it a story, it doesn’t mix well and makes this world that has so much potential to be more fleshed out just plain silly. Honestly the characters actions don’t make much sense, but I will just come to peace with myself and consider this one as a Hentai. So as a hentai the sex scenes in my opinion were boring, and if I was to look at it as a smut story, (because yes you can add sex scenes and still have a good story) the story line is bad. Good art, at least it had an ending. 2 stars.