At this point the only character development hands down is granny. She was with Dan since his parents were gone and says she’ll always be with him. But she knows her body too well to know that she needs to let him go before she goes to not leave Dan with more trauma.
frl
At this point I'm Only rooting for granny. Doc Dan's just worrying the old girl, let her have some peace of mind, dammit.(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
"Tastier than a hamburger"? Don't you mean tastier than a double wide suprise?
Author took the idea of "spare time" to the next level, probably made some fanfic chaps of what she might've done for the story, n said nahhhhhhhh fam imma just add them as a side chaps.
Wolf Zaddy gotta fucking learn MC's name (not that any of us are to judge), but it really bothers me that he wanna get MC preggo but keeps calling him "human".
10 YEARS!!?!??! And all he's managed to say was that he was infected by a madman........ nahhh no way!!!! I need a confession from Ilic TODAY!
1 and 2 fonts look good. 3 and 4 not so much.