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It's really good, but sometimes also very confusing, there are just too many parallel dialogs and trains of thought.
Also, I would have liked the seme to express his love a bit more. Sure, we read his thoughts, but he didn't communicate them enough to the uke. Haha at least for my taste ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Apart from that - I love the characters, the plot and the art style!