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It feels very inconsistent. The part where he just "didn't pay attention" and got caught 3 times in a matter of seconds is just so absurd to me. How am I supposed to see the MC as a strong character if he just randomly doesn't notice an attack coming his way 50% of the time?
And how come the squad captain, who was hyped up to be very strong, is suddenly the weakest member?
Hope the dragon thingy he gave her resurrects her, because this is just sad...