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this gets a five stars, it’s was really good, I’m not sure if it’s just my opinion but one Mielle was beheaded I started feeling disinterested. Since she was the true ‘villainess’ of the story it felt complete to me, anyway it makes me upset that they gave her character development in the last seconds of her life, it was 4:00AM and I was crying over this when it was showing what would’ve happened if Mielle wasn’t influenced by Emma. (still crying over it btw because they could have had such a beautiful ending) anyway I couldn’t really read this without getting distracted after Mielle was executed because Billie’s and the rest wasn’t as attention worthy as Mielle and Aria. this was a read that I enjoyed a lot so thank you! ♡