This is good, cute and all, but I found some parts inconsistent. Like after they went to the haunted house, I'm sure the mother just greeted them welcome back and they had a short convo but she disappeared. Then when the childhood friend fell. I think they're in a cafe, but the background shown doesn't look like a cafe? I dunno, maybe editor's error or panel gone missing?
I'm kinda late, but I think you might've missed the line "See you later! I'm going shopping" smth part after they had a short convo. Can't blame you tho, the texts are tiny
This is good, cute and all, but I found some parts inconsistent. Like after they went to the haunted house, I'm sure the mother just greeted them welcome back and they had a short convo but she disappeared. Then when the childhood friend fell. I think they're in a cafe, but the background shown doesn't look like a cafe? I dunno, maybe editor's error or panel gone missing?
I'm kinda late, but I think you might've missed the line "See you later! I'm going shopping" smth part after they had a short convo. Can't blame you tho, the texts are tiny