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The plot is all over the place and things are moving too fast and I'm wondering if I'm missing something. Earlier chapter mentions the thief being 'unlucky' bcs he kept managing to escape his captors. Umm really that's not unlucky? Its actually the opposite of that. So you're telling me he actually wants to be arrested, and he's so unlucky he cant? So then the whole point of seeking that compass thingy is so that he could be lucky and get arrested? Then why became a thief in the first place smh???
Also when did the detective realise he had feelings for him again? Last thing I remember he was still on the whole wanting to catch him fiasco. He even tried to stalk him, got captured, saw him without his mask at his home, then fast forward he's out of there and literally the next chapter it's all about him dealing with his feelings for him. What?? How did that get there from there I. And now theres the misunderstanding with that compass. What the heck is happening.