making webcomics is hard,, but this is a mess so far. the storytelling is all over the place and not smooth at all. the first few chapters are arguably the most important bc they reel in readers, and bc theyre the starting points thatnwill eatablish the quality of the webcomic, and they kinda fucked it up. theyre introducing characters without giving readers a reason to give a shit about them lol. the plot seems boring and generic. the only unique thing is that the mc has pink hair. also the ml seems like an asshole
LMAOO girl what he just knew everything the moment he caught her sniffing the shirt that escalated so fast JANDJABFNAKJSND this whole chapter was wack