beta
ehhhhhh its ok. Not bad not great I give it points for not being an isekai or reincarnation. the plot logic is pretty lacking though, like shes smart enough to memorize all this but too dumb to figure out her man is cheating on her? getting turned into a slave was also a pretty weak scene like at least slap him or something more satisfying. ML is kinda bland looking and seems like a typical asshole elitist so not too wowed by him. Im going to read a few more chapters since it seems like there is some interesting stuff with the magic system and they might just be rushing the intro to get to the story.