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This was adorable but so rushed! :(
Like, the childhood friend plot had so much potential! He easily could've came back during the training camp arc (since they're in a different location for it) and caused some drama for the mains. Like for ex, Soohyun could've easily realized he used to have feelings for him or smth since they had talked about like moving in and stuff. So, that could've caused him to think about his feelings for Woojin and for Woojin to realize his own feelings for Soohyun! Also Jaejin just disappeared ??? I feel like Soohyun might have some issues from the childhood friend situation too that could've been addressed or explored further since he basically almost quit baseball because of it???
But all in all, it was adorable. It just felt like there was a lot of stuff that was missing that could've made it better!