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niko created a topic of The Baker on the First Floor

ive got to admit, i didn't like this one. the characters basically went from acquaintances to sex friends to roommates to lovers to broken up in the span of a few chapters. the author didn't develop the romance very well, to be honest i had no idea they were officially dating until they broke up. and that made their reunion even weirder. its hard to believe their "love" would've lasted those two years apart, and the fact that they got right back on track as really annoying

i feel like the author had a really cool idea, and just didn't know what to do with it. i will say though, the romance between the sister and that celebrity was pretty cute. honestly id rather have a story about them