Having to proof read chapters as I go is getting fucking annoying. They say “I” when they really mean “you” ugh
It gets better don't worry, and the plus side is that at least we're still left with an inkling of the plot. Some are so bad I have absolutely ZERO idea what is going on, despite extremely detailed, fully coloured, second by second images of what is happening. One I read (insanely r rated so I won't say what it is on this -pg13 at most- story's comment board) was so bad that it made more sense not reading it at all, than it did to do so. You could also put it in “want to read”, and make sure you click the “follow” check mark. While in the review menu, wrote yourself a little note in the comments section that says “waiting for officials” and click the “only for me” under it. It will help to remind you that you're interested, and it won't just still in your “want to read” box stewing.
This is literally like a news paper, I wait on it daily!
Maybe I’ll come back to this but I’m not liking that the kids are inlove with her.
Skipped all the rape and he could be interesting but gah damn. It’s not even the good dark stuff just fetish shit
Same especially that first fight…