Virtues of the Villainess
THIS STORY HAD THE POTENTIAL.
1. Too fast, it has good beginning but the story slowly crumble, it feels forced, the story to find a way to life the curse is too forced, like find the necklace, find the book, so ridiculous.
2. ML's personality is too absurd, at first we can show he used mask to deceive people that he's trustworthy, but later ML's personality is only focused to FL only.
3. Hamel deserves better, their love story is much better for me
4. Plot has potential if only they write carefully about the progress.
5. I feel like this story is easy to guess, I DON'T FEEL THE ROYALTY AT ALL HERE, too much focused on FL & ML so i feel like author forget about the world in the story, the setting, etc.
all i can say is, with an interesting story like this u have bad executions.
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