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satan comes to human world
it's a horror game that FL played, she suddenly comes and becomes maid, ada layar quest, awalny hindari ML, lama-lama ketauan karena ML insting nya tajam, ML hrus bunuh orang biar tetap hidup, ambil energi istilahny

ada dokter yg keliatan jahat tpi bntuin young master adrian, ad hilda si FL, ada temen maidnya si emily dll, FL ad kekuatan tpi dk banyak, kebal hipnotis ML, ML suka bunga seni, ibunya stress gila karena tau anakny keturunan setan kali soalny dk bisa kena holy water

last chapter kill org si maid yg rakus maling gt dh

70,
INTINYA game sistem kek bisa sentuhan real life gt, cewe ny dk tau, cowony nganggap cewe hantu

regretnyo dk begitu ngena nn.
FL punya adik yg aturanny menikah sm duke jdi sm cowo yg dia cintai dan kabur lalu sisa kakany, ayahny baik sayang keluarga dh tua

1. FL lumpuh karena jatuh gt, pandai sembuhin orang.
2. ML duke yg nak jadi emperor, nikahin FL awalnyo karena gold dan simpati rakyat gitu nah
3 Manipulatif parah, buat FL dituduh tpi nyelamatin jg
4 ada kek butler cowo yg cinta FL tpi benci ML karena manfaatin FL
5. mak duke baik lho
6. pernah hamil tapi harus digugurin demi keselamatan FL, FL dk suka
7. FL kabur karena digugurin tanpa mau dio, merasa kehilangan, ML menyesal

THIS STORY HAD THE POTENTIAL.
1. Too fast, it has good beginning but the story slowly crumble, it feels forced, the story to find a way to life the curse is too forced, like find the necklace, find the book, so ridiculous.
2. ML's personality is too absurd, at first we can show he used mask to deceive people that he's trustworthy, but later ML's personality is only focused to FL only.
3. Hamel deserves better, their love story is much better for me
4. Plot has potential if only they write carefully about the progress.
5. I feel like this story is easy to guess, I DON'T FEEL THE ROYALTY AT ALL HERE, too much focused on FL & ML so i feel like author forget about the world in the story, the setting, etc.

all i can say is, with an interesting story like this u have bad executions.