why is everyone here acting like the author making jk the biggest piece of trash so ppl hate him is bad writing and not intentional? like thats the point, making him so unlikeable so smthing horrible happens to him or and we feel bad for him, then we aknowledge that dan loves him so he forgives him and we forgive him too. but thats the challengue for this story, and lots of stories like these. to have characters like that and then redeem them, unlocking backstories etc, like why do u think the author just writes one day at a time and doesnt have lots of things planned up ahead? like lots of things seem useless rn but them they fall into place, and then we understand (or dont, thats also the challengue for the writer, to excecute the plot well and the intentions of the characters to come off like they wanted it to)
theres a lot of authors in media that has had us simpathize with literal murderers/pieces of trash etc. so idk if the author is gonna pull this off, but theres alrdy a lot of fans that even like JK just as he is rn so,, (not one of them myself)
so critizice the characters yeah, the pace of the writing yeah, but don't act like its "bad writing" or affirm that the author doesnt know what theyre doing bc we havent even reached the climax of the story and, u don't know what will take place futher into the plot :/
but ofc you all have all the right to drop etc. but note that some of these coments are kinda rude especially when this is an illegal site and u arent even paying for reading the story idk ..
idk why i find so adorable that he uses the emojis "o.o" etc I LOVE HIM