beta
I really do like stories such as these. Like from beginning to end, it tells a coherent story and the writing was pretty good for a oneshot.
Obviously it would've been so much sweeter to see an actual teacher who cared and helped blondie with his issues and gave him a future perspective and showed him to be happy in life BUT this is not the type of story told here.
It's about grooming a minor and passing it onwards, from being a victim to becoming a predator yourself.
I appreciate that all the descriptions make it clear that this is not a loving and mutual relationship but abuse instead, the smell going from pleasant to bad, the metaphorical bruises left by the "bigger" hands & that even the MC acknowledges he has no one else to rely on. Overall solid 4/5