beta
You see I don't like thrashing someone else's hard work but the story just sucked so bad. The pace is all over the place, the plot is just unclear. The world building couldn't be more VAGUE. Just what is going on. They don't even delve into her past life in details. The characters are annoying too sometimes. Their conversations just don't make sense most of the time. I don't understand their relationship dynamics. They accused her of being a spy from their enemy when she was just a freaking infant but then suddenly they accepted her so easily cuz she was cute? The unexpected timeskip threw me off too. One chapter she was a baby, next chapter she was 7. They talked about visiting a piece of unchartered land when she was just a baby but they sure took their sweet time cuz she only got to visit that land when she turned 7
This series is so messy that they're actually becoming funny. What a trainwreck.