Meme Cultivator

Cus the author teased us abt otoha aint no way they leave us hanging

Ps: I never read the novel so idk how far off from the novel is the manwha

I feel like this manwha is too rushed. Esp the ending. Like, i saw ch 72 as last chapter but when i open ch 68 there was this whole revelation and awakening and stuff stuffed into arguably 3 chapters bcs the last one is epilogue basically. This manwha could've been much better if it was drawn/written more slowly. Not saying that it should've been a slow burn. But, the artists could've spared more little sections where the fl and ml bonded (business works and stuff not counted) instead of suddenly jumping on them kissing and stuff. And the out of pocket declaration makes it seem like this is some weird ahh manwha with red flags walking everywhere.

This manwha is tagged with romance, but the romance isn't quite there, yk what i mean? Like I've read stories where the romance is the side quest but it's still expressed better than this.

It would've been nice if Ayla's relationship with her family is given more parts too yk, bcs it feels like it wasn't explained and contemplated enough by Ayla herself. It was just like "i didn't mean to abandon u child" and Ayla was like "ok we good." We could've gotten a better found family trope .

Instead of these parts that i mentioned i feel like we spend too much panels on unimportant fillers(?). I mean i appreciate the funny fillers and sometimes humor, but a lot of the panels are just useless thinking that's been shown like what? 5 times? And it's just from Ayla's side.

The realization where Killian finally understand his feeling is too rushed and the hit was not quite hitting. Also i feel like some characters are just put there for nothing and then dissapeared, no explanation. Or sometimes a character just pops outa nowhere just to deliver information, but at the same time the character felt like they don't belong in the story.

Overall, i quite like the plot, it was good, could've been written better. I also like the dynamics, but again not enough interaction to make these dynamics shine. Idk what the novel is like but I already feel like Tokyo Ghoul Manga fans when they watch the anime. You know it could've been great, but shit delivery