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Wtf... This is so good, everything about it is perfect. The world building, the flow of the story, the complexity of the characters and their personalities, all of it are great and have depths to them. For me, the characters stands out SO much compared to other characters of the same genre that I've read about. Although their character archetype are typical, a good-willed alchemist x cold grand duke, the characters doesn't feel shallow AT ALL and I love how they actually have personality traits that differs from their initial character archetype. Glunn is REALLY funny to me. He's all that but in the end he's kind of silly Also even if Ennid is a really kind person, he's not THAT naive, he's kinda petty and actually really headstrong when he wants to be. They're entertaining and they can make you feel attached to them.
Overall 103846372819/10 story, WILL reread and I WILL hunt for the novel