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the only thing i REALLY disliked about the story is the way the author kind of romanticized the mc's suicide. i understand WHY the mc did it, but the way the other dude (I'm really bad with names LMAO SORRY) literally walked in on him just as he failed his first attempt and the way it kinda boosted their romance just left a bad taste in my mouth. stuff like suicide and mental illnesses need to be portrayed VERY carefully in fiction, this is the reason why, for example, so many people hate 13 reasons why. because it was a bad portrayal of suicide and actually left a lot of people triggered (hate that word because of the right smfh) and messed up people's mental health way more than helped them. but that's just my opinion, i'm not a certified doctor or anything, just thought there was a better way to approach such a serious topic