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I’m with everyone that wants bonus chapters/side stories now that they’ve fixed things, but I don’t agree it’s too short. I feel like it was the perfect length for a cute, baby-angst miscommunication-breakup then getting back together story. It would’ve gotten tiresome if it had dragged out more!
I really like that they actually communicated once Leo finally realized he screwed up and needed to apologize. I also love that J.J. couldn’t resist and didn’t continue to hold it against his adorable airhead once they talked, too. But I’m dyin to see them get to go on J.J.’s birthday trip or do other coupley things now that things are better. We deserve more cuteness after all that emotional turmoil! (▰˘◡˘▰)
This was really cute but oh my lawd that ending felt abrupt.
What happened with MCs family? We know nothing about MLs either. What about MLs friend that thought he had a gf? I really wanted him to be supportive T.T but we never got to find out! The thing with the ex felt unfinished too…
And the second couple? Theirs felt wrapped up well enough but I thought for sure that MCs Dad would cause a problem for the Uncle. I really liked them together, it would’ve been really cute to see MC & MLs reaction to their relationship.
Just feels like a lot of loose ends… that I actually wanted to see tied up. The art is cute and the story was otherwise engaging, I want more ╥﹏╥