beta
I don’t think plot wise this is bad. I actually enjoy it for the most part. But it’s really not believable on how oblivious and naive the fl is. I like her being a swordswoman and don’t really think she needs to be “masculine” or a cold person, you can still have a bubbly and kind person without dumbing her down. I am surprised the possibility of a divorce is coming up sooner than I expected and assumed it would take much longer.
I’m not really sure on how I feel about ML. I do like the interactions between him and fl where she teaches him swordsmanship instead of the reverse version which I’ve seen countless times, that’s a nice touch.
I do hope fl grows more strong minded in the future