Chapter 4 was so stupid. There were a bunch of witnesses, why didn't it occur to literally anyone that they could've gotten the police involved and have that guy charged with assault and maybe even attempted murder?
His stuffing must be crazy durable for the arrow to not just go clean through him and pierce the duke anyway
Idk her father being just comically evil is kinda boring. Her being meek in her abusive father's presence is an interesting dynamic that could've been explored more, but this story didn't actually want to deal with abusive relationships at all. Everything in this is so surface level
People keep talking about the dicks, but what's a huge turn-off for me is the ultra defined muscles on every character.
I'm getting real sick of every BL manga character having defined 8-packs. That's not normal, those are dehydrated
I hate it when a slow burn gets wrapped up so quickly at the end...
I wanted to see more of them as a couple!
It's so funny that Alessande got worse lmao. Everyone else is living a better life, meanwhile he's just a womanizer for real now
Contextualising a villain's personality with a backstory is interesting and a good tool, but in this case it feels unnecessary. We already knew that he didn't have it good. This really just feels like we're supposed to be understanding of his vile behaviour instead of just providing context
How stupid is Rosalyn that she believes she'll have her love returned if her rivals die? She's supposed to be smart but behaves braindead because of love.
I hope she is leading Lyla away to warn her and confess the truth, otherwise I hope they deal with her quickly.
I can't help but feel frustrated about her lost potential. What a waste.
The author is pulling punches, that juice should've been past the expiration date. It's not bad to give your child juice that hasn't expired yet, just because it'll expire soon. Kind of a stupid start
His sister literally left town because of the fighting, and he wants to keep doing it? The emotional core of this story was just kinda bullshit to me.
For me to like it, there should've been a greater emphasis about how all their beef is super pointless and meaningless
What an absolute moron, you have a PHONE! USE IT.
Not once did it occur to this fucker to call someone about the child, instead of just taking him with him.
The harem really didn't fit this story. It just feels tacked on, and I find the cop out open ending irritating.
If it wasn't going to be properly developed, there shouldn't have been any romance at all.
I'm sick of daughters looking like their mothers and sons looking like their fathers, so personally I hope the author will be more creative
*chanting quietly under my breath* do a fake dating scenario, do a fake dating scenario!!
If the bots are uploading official chapters what is even the issue? What do we need a placeholder for? Feels super unnecessary
Idk, I find it weird how everyone is talking about abandonment as if giving up your child for adoption is some unforgivable abhorrent act. Life is simply more complicated and nuanced than that.
Whyyy did he have that sex toy if he wasn't even using it? That was such a missed opportunity to make him an unexpected bottom. Would've made the whole thing more interesting.
As it stands it wasn't very romantic and kinda bland, but I didn't hate it
