The art is way too good for a short story ,i wish This was longer
I've read many toxic bls and this is the first time I've felt SO UNCOMFORTABLE reading a sex chapter......imma still keep reading tho
my favourite genre of bl is slightly hysterical self-hating bottom vs top that loves them more than anything, like akuheki and kinda oni to tengoku. if anyone has any recommendations in this way throw em my way pls
i loved this!! esp kai and the seme, saur cuteee. i don't have a problem with the uke sleeping around like he's an adult so go get that d. butttt, the 3P the author did was sooo unnecessary and out of the blue. seeing how the uke acts and has already got close to the seme around that time, it was verrryyyy unlikely he would actually sleep with someone tho he might look for someone bcs he was still in denial about his feelings but i can sense that he won't actually sleep with them esp how he's thinking about the seme. but the author went in and made a 3P scene hmp!! it just wasn't like him as a writer myself i can feel it in my guts that it wasn't the uke but the author made him do it.
Guys, it's drunk s*x, not exactly r*pe but yes it shouldn’t have happened. They were both drinking and MC wanted ML to take out his (as it seemed from the Raw). It’s still f*cked up nonetheless. He slut shames MC as it's not his first time seeing a (like dude he was assaulted that time for God's sake!). ML was impatient and MC ends up bleed!ng down there.
bro… why cant bl be nowadays be like this? why does every bl nowadays have to have rape(from the ML), abuse, blackmail, SA? like why cant authors make a story that makes fucking sense, doesnt circle around %99.9 of the same bs bl’ plot which is (rape blackmail etc), like fucking hell whys consent not a thing in bls why is rape being so sexualized like i get its just fiction but i cant even read a newgen bl without fucking raging cuz the ml rapes the mc then says sorry for 2 chapters and its all forgotten and why the fuck they make ukes so weak and pathetic as well? anyway this comment section wasnt the right place for all this rant ik but wanted to say it anyways
Tbh...I'm shocked. I'm shocked it has such a good score. I read through the end (up to side 16) and I didn't get the so awaited "it will be better later" moment. Some comedy/wooho parts were ok but the characters aren't likeable and the rest is plain stupid, cliche, infantile. I don't know if I'm missing the whole point of this piece like, is it satire? Or was I expecting too much?
see kids what studying does to you!
(thank you sm for the upload<3)
Shit like JINX should be cancelled instead... This plot is fresh and not cliche, and chemistry is totally there... ugh so much potential waste...
I like it when they get a lil jealous and possessive but I swear if this becomes a bigger problem bro-
MY SHAYLA .. I'm happy to see Soft younger tops x Handsome bratty older bottoms... we need more of this instead of constant toxic AF Semes and backbonelesspussybottom ukes
I have aged many a years waiting for this to update imma pass away soon
It's been almost two years and I still haven't moved on. I'm never moving on. I miss you, babe. Please come back to me. Life hasn't been the same ever since you left. I try to move on and find something new, but nothing fills the void you left.
Sure everyone is biased towards the MC, but is the other guy so wrong? The MC now is happy and doesn't fight anymore, because he found the ML. That's ok, but what does this matter to him? Why is MC expecting him to stop fighting and to change, just because he himself is happy now? All in all it's none of his business, so the guy is right, MC wants him to stop to make himself feel better. And who's the MC to decide what makes the other guy happy? Sure he might not like fighting, but it's still a way to relive stress or something and who knows maybe his right partner could be found there, because having the same plot twice would be a bit boring
Everyone's hating but honestly, I get the guy. I feel like Misuzu IS doing it to calm his own conscience down more than it being that he cares for this guy. I've been in similar situations and can say that most of the time when someone 'moves on' from their past they want to tie all lose threads to feel truly happy and fulfilled, and he's just one of Misuzu's lose threads. Misuzu wants to feel worthy and in the same standing as Kitahara, as such, he's trying to 'fix' this guy from his past. Everyone's so blind to MCs innocence and his love story with the ML that they think they're flawless but honestly it irks me. After that first incident he never actively went after MC anymore and even talked cordially to him. It's the MC who's CHASING AFTER HIM and who's FORCING him to open up to him when they haven't been close in a long time, and who knows maybe Misuzu WAS the one who left him behind?? Misuzu just wants him back as his best friend so he can finally gave a complete fulfilled life. Imagine the person you hate and made you feel miserable move on from that past and be happy while you're still stuck in that past you were put in. Everyone will feel upset. Jealous even. It's HUMAN. Misuzu is not entitled to anything from him, he's not entitled to befriend Misuzu again or be all happy happy for him. I don't hate Misuzu I love the ML and MC but maybe think a little past that too.
I dont really know why you guys hated that new blonde ah guy. To be fair, I kinda sympathize with him. Imagine going for lengths to be friends with someone. Only for that "someone" to ditch you when you were got beaten up. Then returning to see that friend was already happy without you. I get why the MC left him but honestly, leaving without explaining will only hurt your friend confused. If I were the friend, I too will not forgive him easily.