2024-11-12 13:20 marked
I am a grown adult, so seeing shotas/lolis legit makes me feel uncomfortable and disgusted. Especially when one of them is in a romantic relationship with a TEACHER (who is also a demon and is much older than he looks).
I understand looking young, but NOT that young. The principle looks like a child (with his height and appearance he looks like he is 8 years old), which I hate, because he is also acting like a child + a little perverted? Then the human helper also looks MUCH younger than he is suppose to be, which is like 17-19 years old (he is also acting like a child, but, in contrast, also has/uses a dildo, which is VERY sus??), and in a relationship with a teacher? Furthermore, with a teacher that watched him grow up/raised him??? I almost threw up.
Then there is Theo and his servant?? The servant literally watched him grow up since Theo was a little kid. And he had feelings for him? For a child he basically raised? Beugh… What the fuck is wrong with the author…
I see author’s fetish and I legit cannot enjoy this manhua. This is disgusting and disturbing. And I’m not even starting with an age gap between 19yo MC and 50+ yo ML. That makes it THREE really concerning relationships and all of them are important and semi-important characters??
Btw, they say in the beginning that ML (Fu Yu) is 50+ years old, but later in the manhua they visit his mom and his sister (who is a few years older than him and a human) still is pretty young. Meaning, his mother should’ve died a long time ago and his sister should’ve been an old woman by now, but no. Just a big plot hole I want to point out.
The itself plot is mediocre and has so many dumb and unnecessary moments that were making me roll my eyes (like when human helper purposely sent MC to gay club to get assaulted(?) or get in trouble just because MC was coping better about not having a full family… What…?). Furthermore, the plot development is cringy and clumsy. For example, the plot line with Theo and MC. So much build-up just to end it so abruptly, which was underwhelming. Dude was looking for MC for a decade or more just to suddenly give up because MC started to develop feeling for ML and go straight to alcoholism? Like… what? It all started and ended so quickly that Theo’s reaction feels overdramatic and made me roll my eyes. And it’s just one example out of countless.
The final battle with BBEG was also very disappointing. The whole manhua it was very vague what exactly the bad guys wanted. They kept feeding the special poison to demons just… because (they never explain it properly how it adds to their overall plan. i think they were doing it just to test it but idk)? They also attack the ball to… erm… just cause chaos? Then suddenly they just throw everything at the reader without any build-up, introduce THE BBEG out of nowhere and defeat them (the BBEG is sexless/could be a man or a woman) in few chapters. Very underwhelming and disappointing.
Characters are not enjoyable too. I love our MC and ML is… okay ig. He changes towards the end of manhua, which is good. Love that for him. The rest are just so plain or actually annoying and just straight up bastards. Other characters appear like 3-5 times the whole manhua and I just don’t understand why even waste time giving them screen time when they are not even relevant. And I’m not talking about MC’s mom or actually important side characters. I’m talking about characters like the butterfly demon girl that first appeared for the ball. I mean, I love her. She is one of the only characters who is in a normal relationship with her girl best friend, but she appeared two times the whole manhua. Why even add her and tell her story when she is NOT relevant to the plot whatsoever? Instead of actually flesh out the characters, their motivation and main characters’ relationship - author just wastes time on unnecessary things.
I wish that author, instead of throwing countless characters and developing problematic relationships, actually focused on the main couple and the story.
Anyways, throw tomatoes at the author. I know what you are.
I understand looking young, but NOT that young. The principle looks like a child (with his height and appearance he looks like he is 8 years old), which I hate, because he is also acting like a child + a little perverted? Then the human helper also looks MUCH younger than he is suppose to be, which is like 17-19 years old (he is also acting like a child, but, in contrast, also has/uses a dildo, which is VERY sus??), and in a relationship with a teacher? Furthermore, with a teacher that watched him grow up/raised him??? I almost threw up.
Then there is Theo and his servant?? The servant literally watched him grow up since Theo was a little kid. And he had feelings for him? For a child he basically raised? Beugh… What the fuck is wrong with the author…
I see author’s fetish and I legit cannot enjoy this manhua. This is disgusting and disturbing. And I’m not even starting with an age gap between 19yo MC and 50+ yo ML. That makes it THREE really concerning relationships and all of them are important and semi-important characters??
Btw, they say in the beginning that ML (Fu Yu) is 50+ years old, but later in the manhua they visit his mom and his sister (who is a few years older than him and a human) still is pretty young. Meaning, his mother should’ve died a long time ago and his sister should’ve been an old woman by now, but no. Just a big plot hole I want to point out.
The itself plot is mediocre and has so many dumb and unnecessary moments that were making me roll my eyes (like when human helper purposely sent MC to gay club to get assaulted(?) or get in trouble just because MC was coping better about not having a full family… What…?). Furthermore, the plot development is cringy and clumsy. For example, the plot line with Theo and MC. So much build-up just to end it so abruptly, which was underwhelming. Dude was looking for MC for a decade or more just to suddenly give up because MC started to develop feeling for ML and go straight to alcoholism? Like… what? It all started and ended so quickly that Theo’s reaction feels overdramatic and made me roll my eyes. And it’s just one example out of countless.
The final battle with BBEG was also very disappointing. The whole manhua it was very vague what exactly the bad guys wanted. They kept feeding the special poison to demons just… because (they never explain it properly how it adds to their overall plan. i think they were doing it just to test it but idk)? They also attack the ball to… erm… just cause chaos? Then suddenly they just throw everything at the reader without any build-up, introduce THE BBEG out of nowhere and defeat them (the BBEG is sexless/could be a man or a woman) in few chapters. Very underwhelming and disappointing.
Characters are not enjoyable too. I love our MC and ML is… okay ig. He changes towards the end of manhua, which is good. Love that for him. The rest are just so plain or actually annoying and just straight up bastards. Other characters appear like 3-5 times the whole manhua and I just don’t understand why even waste time giving them screen time when they are not even relevant. And I’m not talking about MC’s mom or actually important side characters. I’m talking about characters like the butterfly demon girl that first appeared for the ball. I mean, I love her. She is one of the only characters who is in a normal relationship with her girl best friend, but she appeared two times the whole manhua. Why even add her and tell her story when she is NOT relevant to the plot whatsoever? Instead of actually flesh out the characters, their motivation and main characters’ relationship - author just wastes time on unnecessary things.
I wish that author, instead of throwing countless characters and developing problematic relationships, actually focused on the main couple and the story.
Anyways, throw tomatoes at the author. I know what you are.
2024-11-12 13:16 marked
2024-11-12 06:47 marked
Don’t get me wrong, I enjoyed it a lot, it put me through a good roller coaster and I’m happy that Mr Lee got to be happy, but my mouth tastes bitter after reading the ending because I just don’t see how their relationship could work out in the longer run, there’s still many plot holes that haven’t been filled properly or if they had it’s rushed and dry (for example Mr Lee’s relationship with his parents, yuri’s toxic tendencies, yuri’s friends worries about their relationship, yuri’s studies and career etc.) mainly I think what annoys me the most it’s the fact that Mr lee’s concerns about yuri’s toxic tendencies were brushed off so easily, yuri was VERY controlling, clingy, had extreme mood swings and abandonment issue, and only imagining being with him it’s already tiring me, when it’s good with him, it’s such a high, but when it’s bad, it’s so bad and so much more (and im being very generous, especially in the scene where yohan complained that yuri shouldn’t talk and swear at mr lee, you don’t talk to your partner like that specially at the beginning or the relationship no matter how upset you are, later on that can escalate into something worse), idk what I’m saying anymore, I wished it was addressed more properly in the story bc although yuri’s character did grow a lot compared to the earlier episodes he still has much to work on, I understand the purpose is not making a character perfect, the more flaws they have the more realistic it is and the author has nailed it in that sense, the toxicity and raw mistakes in their relationship makes them more realistic but as a manhwa story, I only wish they could heal and form a healthy way of showing love.
2024-11-12 06:41 marked
2024-11-12 06:41 marked
2024-11-11 08:31 marked
No matter how many times I reread this, it always feels like the first time. The author is so good at laying out important points in the plot in the limited number of chapters. Short and sweet, so they say.
Yoshida and his superb emotional intelligence is probably my most favorite thing in this story. Dare I say, he is such an important character that helped the two come together. So important that with a simple, "Is that really how you feel?" he was able to enlighten Midori about the feelings he is not ready to face. Then again, despite knowing Midori's feelings and apparent denial, he is not the type of character that pushed bot MCs to come together, instead he allowed them, Midori especially, to live the realizations on their own, but was also the first to congratulate them when they finally got together. I love his character so much because it's how it should be. I feel that I, as a reader, would secretly hope for a quick solution that would end the suffering of the characters. Then again, if Yoshida was a character that represented me as a reader, then I'm glad I did not interfere, and was patient. Because their love is as bitter as it is sweet with or without external competition or pressure.
Yoshida and his superb emotional intelligence is probably my most favorite thing in this story. Dare I say, he is such an important character that helped the two come together. So important that with a simple, "Is that really how you feel?" he was able to enlighten Midori about the feelings he is not ready to face. Then again, despite knowing Midori's feelings and apparent denial, he is not the type of character that pushed bot MCs to come together, instead he allowed them, Midori especially, to live the realizations on their own, but was also the first to congratulate them when they finally got together. I love his character so much because it's how it should be. I feel that I, as a reader, would secretly hope for a quick solution that would end the suffering of the characters. Then again, if Yoshida was a character that represented me as a reader, then I'm glad I did not interfere, and was patient. Because their love is as bitter as it is sweet with or without external competition or pressure.
2024-11-11 08:29 marked
Am i turning homophonic or what? I can't sit and read bl/gls like i used to anymore
2024-11-11 08:11 marked
2024-11-06 12:35 marked
2024-11-06 07:50 marked
Okay so I couldn't help myself and I went and found poorly translated versions of chapters 81 and 82 and let me just say our boy Jake is so whipped lmfao. I mean he's a walking green flag, sure he shoots people in their asses but it's all for the greater good and to protect his man. I knew shin was going to be mad but I didn't think he was going to be that mad like damn. How do you guys think he's going to react when he finds out bro was special forces or whatever he was? I mean me personally I think it's hot and it's just an added layer of security and it would be 10 times better than being a gangster but you know there's got to be some plot
2024-11-05 06:33 marked
It’s not everyday you encounter a grown BL story like this. While there was still moments to deepen the plot, it wasn’t in a way that’d make you annoyed or anything, I just kept nodding and reading because every thing was handled so maturely. It didn’t raise my blood pressure like the other ones usually do lol. It was short, sweet and straight to the point. I even admired how fluid and real the sex was to back off the mature aspect of the book as welllll. 10s 10s 10s across the board! (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
2024-11-02 11:11 marked
2024-11-02 10:58 marked
this is honestly making me feel so nauseous reading this like i’ve been reading it bc it’s so crazy and wild but now it’s a little TOO much to the point that im actually feeling nauseous like WTF did i just read…???? HOW ARE SOME OF YALL ENJOYING THISSS….after this latest chapter i don’t think i wanna find out what happens next i already know the damn brothers are gonna end up together. that step brother is a nasty wild freak fr
2024-11-02 10:57 marked
I don’t know his name, but homeboy with blonde hair could really get it. ...