Birdy-kun's Manga

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This could be good but idk, something's off. ML is hot AF though

47 Temp. Dropped
1) There's supposedly reason for betrayal (I can guess why) but like, it's still shitty imo.
2) not revenge focused enough. I also really really really hate plotlines where female characters return or reincarnate and for dumb reasons can't regain their previous skills. ALWAYS author makes them sick or weaker and they become dainty flowers. I don't care if she has rare badass moments if she spends most of the story weak. It's such a cop out to want girl power independence but also cator to the fantasy girl stereotype
3. It's a travesty for this story to try and portray Estelle as being manipulated or delusional about her country. Being a night isn't about serving the most morally correct country. It's just about using your skills to protect said country. Why TF did they feel the need to give her a hero worship personality about her country? She was a commoner, she grew up poor, she had to struggle to even become a knight? It just adds to the story being "foolish girl trying to be a knight" instead of "Valiant knight betrayed". They should have had Khalid betray her from ex kings orders or sum shit, she became the symbol of resistance so the country couldn't surrender without killing her. Something. Like, yeah, I can kinda see how interesting it can be, but just, it gives me the ick. I don't wanna see her loose everything about herself because warrior Estelle was manipulated or not a real person.

Dropped 22

The dad forgiving her after she abused their child is wild. Like, it's insane.

Dropped at 39. I just get so irritated when powerful girl can't be more powerful than man for xyz. Idk, for a MC who took out 3 grown men as a 10 year old, her struggling so much against that snake and the other monsters when she's been training 3 people for nearly a decade is ridiculous.

Also the romance sucks. It feels like shota bait that mc has to be younger than ML and is so drastically shorter than him too. Like why the hard on for making FL seem tiny and young

Dropped CHP 3

The only reverse harem stories that work to me are when each guy has their own unique storyline with the female lead. That means pros and cons ect. This just irritates me.

Dropped 35

It's not a bad story, but it has a plotline of "do to others as you want to be treated" that the story just touching forgets.

It's insinuated that lying, tricking ect people will result in bad things happening to her, but this doesn't happen all the time. Also, she has really weak motivations for revenge (at least on her sister. All the big evilness of her sister is shown when she returns back in time. Like, if my sister helped a man who was gonna marry me now, and killed my ex husband and spread rumours about me, id kill her too just in case.

Also MC was like, a horrible person in her past life, so her getting good things in her new life doesn't feel earned

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