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So a few things.
First, the reaction on everyone once they've realized Kala was alive are so emotionless, I mean, they're happy to see her it seems like, but I'd expect more crying and have a more emotional reaction, like Kala's mom is the only reaction that makes sense.
Second, Everyone's learning of Kala's time traveling super quickly, I'd have expected it to at least take 25 chapters until Kala even realized that she time traveled.
Third, my preferences hate love triangles, and I feel like it's going in that direction.