beta
I'm enjoying the story so far, and while it may have some cliches, it remains entertaining with acceptable character reasoning. There are no misunderstandings, which is plus points. Overall, everything is great, but my only issue is the constant repetition of phrases like "she changed," "she's different," and "she's not like the past." (makes sense since is a different person after all) It was bearable in the first chapters, but it becomes quite annoying when they keep saying it in every chapter for no reason. On the bright side, I'm happy that her escort/knight sees her the same way even though she's really different and chooses to believe in her. I'll continue reading since I like the direction the story is taking and the characters. However, I hope they focus more on other aspects of the novel rather than repeating the same thing over and over again. Nonetheless, I still recommend the story.