Who tf are these people with the navy speech bubbles. Why didn’t you stretch his turnaround (Alexei). What, he just woke up in love? Bad structure frfr…
I’m kinda lost on the direction. Plus the emotions are all over the place. There’s no rapport. I just don’t LIKE these characters yet.
Welp, he’s not an oil painting like the cover. But it’s aight.
What’s his deal? Why is he such a shitbag? It’s giving cheap melodrama and I’m not liking it at all. Where is the bdsm? He’s too inconsistent.
Everything I said in my review still holds. I forgot the plot, came back for a reread and felt the exact same way. If it wasn’t for Ren I would’ve lowered it to 1 star. I’m just not fkn with Asuza raping Kaede like that. Just tainted the rest of the story for me. Maybe if there was more backstory of them as kids cause that seems like a lot was cut out. Then home wrecker Hikaru was much also.
At least Haeyoung makes more sense (he’s a psychopath). But Taegyeom touching him like that makes my skin crawl.
I’m not gonna feel sorry for you, psycho! Yall if what I think is true this dudes a pdf. He’s too crazy for my taste.