bad pacing, like really really bad pacing that i just skipped the smeg scene coz it was uncomfortable
i disliked on accident
i'm 4 chapters in WHY THE HELL IS HE SO FREAKYYY like dawg, stop, you're embarrassing meeeeeee
AYO SAVE MY GUY, MY WINE COLORED HAIRED MAN FROM THESE FUCKERS
the uncensored dick surprised the shit out of me
ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ lol
A VIRGIN THAT KNOWS ABOUT SEXUAL INTERCOURSE AND A VIRGIN THAT JUST HAD A CRASH COURSE LEZZGOO
THIS SENT MEEEEEE LMAO
too many plot holes. cliff's disappearance to the other world, how the original author ended up in the other world alongside with the other "ediths," the knight that was actually the long lost prince of another nation, and etc.
also, i don't like how they first wanted to develop the supposed to be land of killeon only to end up as the duke. i wished they both, edith and killeon to still want to develop that land somehow.
the sudden "love at first sight" scene with the henry and the crown princess was kind of random to be honest. i hope to see some of their scenes in the side story.
and kinda wished they showed more of original edith and original rhyse.
PUNISHER IS HERE OMFG EAT ME OUT MOMMY
RSSS