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Ch. 36
I had to stop at chapter 36 because I can't do it anymore sincerely, first of all the protagonist, if she's dead and reincarnated, why does she behave like a 7 year old? it doesn't make sense, that's just the main purpose of the re-enactment part, it's not a hashtag you can put because it would be more interesting. I personally love the hastag reincarnation so the fact that isn't used properly, it makes me angry when I see this. don't get me wrong, I don't want any harm against the author an I know it's his work but I just want to give my personal opinion about his and I wish you could fully understand my criticism, also because I think that the fact that she died of frostbite is something that could add a lot of style to the story, also above all the fact that she has already experienced death itself would be very useful to the story. Another last thing that's a bit personal is that, personally, I quite like the male character with black hair, but changing his image drawing him with long hair, it doesn't make sense to me, if I liked the protagonists with long hair, I'd go to read more, I don't understand why change it after 35 ch. For the rest the style is not bad at all even if simple.