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No author-nim. I love your other works but not this one ╥﹏╥ . Your plot is all over the place. I don't even know what's the goal here anymore. I don't think I can read this now. And can you please stop your habit of always including some clingy person who's always with MC if not a clingy motherfckr then someone who sucks the life outta MC. Gosh! They're so irritating. You got Jahan in The Foul, MC's little brother in Swapping, Yoontae in Blaze out. They irritate me so much! Good thing Rainbow City doesn't have this character yet. I guess the doctor? But he's dead. Anyway. This ain't my cup of tea.