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No No No I cannot continue on reading this despite how good the art is. First up, please don't ever dare to suggest sleeping with a man you have feelings for when you are not even sure of how they felt for you. Save yourself some major heartache and I mean major detrimental heartache. No matter how many times you say to yourself that you will not have any expectations, you will have them because you already have feelings. Girl please, don't make excuses. Better if you just confess and get it over with. I would have loved it if they took this route, I don't know why the author chose sex, probably for smut but nah I cannot. This is too weak. Secondly, confession was too early. The build up was meh, I can't feel it, I don't feel any desperation because remember both of them held back for 3 years. Thirdly, ML says he held back because he doesn't want FL to be riddled in some rumors but goes and sleeps with her. WTH? Isn't she too precious for that? for you to have held back that long? Lastly, Based on the comments seems like the story will become complicated that's probably why the confession was too early, because it wasn't the major conflict, but still, there was no build up for that moment. It was a deal-breaker for me because I feel like I already know how it's gonna be written moving forward and I'm not going to like it. Will probably check it after 2-3 years or when it's already done lol.