beta
one thing i noticed is how the author explains some of the skills they possessed from its limitation -> uses -> how to improve it. i was surprised when they went into detail with the awakened spark dude in the village, details like that even if they're small gives the story and the characters so much life and not feel surfaced-level.
i also like how aside from the main characters, the side characters also have more depth into them and they're just not existing in the background like props. i thoroughly enjoyed reading this that i sometimes forget that it's bl and even omegaverse lol i am only reminded when it gets mentioned time to time.