The English grammar is very off throughout chapters so it makes some portions hard to understand.
There’s also no romance development whatsoever. Daiki went from having a wife who was killed awhile back to now fucking a guy after a few chapters after he was so cold to him in the beginning. Like Daiki’s sexuality isn’t discussed nor do we know if he has always liked men.
This has potential but the story is falling flat on so many levels cause of lack of general character/relationship development. It honestly feels more like a one-shot than an actual story.
Don’t even get me started on the cheetah print tattoo
The English grammar is very off throughout chapters so it makes some portions hard to understand.
There’s also no romance development whatsoever. Daiki went from having a wife who was killed awhile back to now fucking a guy after a few chapters after he was so cold to him in the beginning. Like Daiki’s sexuality isn’t discussed nor do we know if he has always liked men.
This has potential but the story is falling flat on so many levels cause of lack of general character/relationship development. It honestly feels more like a one-shot than an actual story.
Don’t even get me started on the cheetah print tattoo