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Pffffff I really wouldn't be surprised if it was slaves working and dying in the quanat but anyways-
I think I'll drop this. It was an enjoyable read, but... I feel like it's getting repetitive ? He builds, he gains a new pet and points of recognition... After some hardship he overcomes it in some unexpected way... Or he just prevents it with foreseeing with his skill. I'll admit his face is hilarious, him shaking his ass in front of the queen made me laugh out loud, his greed and his striving for more are also funny. These comedy devices are working, but in the end isn't he just some capitalist dude who only truly care only about building faster, better, and always more ? Like, he has this grand talk about saving his employees, caring about them and sacrificing himself for them... while he just overworks them and underpays them ?? While he's so happy to brush off their rights to gain more efficiency or money ?? He does have good or self-righteous sides, but I feel like it's only aspects of the character stitched with each other to make him lovable without making him a whole, which I feel like it creates inconsistencies like the one I pointed out...
Well that's all