is it just me or does this story seems be jumping around?? I feel as though there are missing parts to it
It seems the Author is a little bit of having the 'Slideshow syndrome' - I can tell as a writer myself, and this Slideshow syndrome is a thing in the writer community, where you try to string events together but with not coherent bridge to support those events into one coherent story. The plot just doesn't flow as nicely as others.
Everyone: I feel so bad for Mc, her mental health was horrible!! I love her and wish for her the best!
Me: *remembering everyone's reactions to her before they knew about postpartum "i can't believe her" "I hate the MC" "shes the worst" "there is no excuse" "I am dropping cuz of her actions"* ... (: lol
Same thing is happening with ML LOL, i can almost guarantee that there will be a flashback on his view very soon that will change people opinions...
Either way i think both were at fault and so much miscommunications/misunderstandings can obviously cause harm to the relationship. I wouldn't be so quick to judge the ML just yet
THIS IS SO GOOOOOOOOODDDD!!