Merry! Memory
very cute but the timeline seems to be all over the place. It’s not finished yet but it feels like i’m being told three stories at once. If the flashbacks were timed right it would’ve been better cuz the characters can be confusing on how they met, how they felt about eachother and why the personalities seem diff each time. The mc isn’t even the focus of the story anymore it’s his brother which is fine cuz he’s awesome but like how could they make the brother more interesting then the mc lmfaoo like why would anyone care about him now. It would’ve been better as a side story or if it was a slow burn cuz it already feels like the two are together and now they’re tryna get the plot going or something. Like idc i wanna see the mc and ml talk about their past and figure out a way to be together.
The Count’s Secret Maid