Feels like it was written by a 16yo or something. The whole bdsm was so amateur-like when the seme is supposed to be an expert bc it’s his kink and all. The earrings as nipple piercings felt so awkward and wrong too. Like who tf uses normal earrings as nipple piercings.
The drawing of the uke was awkward altogether. The dude looked like he had snorted cocaine the whole time. His expressions were always off and uncomfortable to watch. And the drawing style is not bad. The seme and the wife were super attractive and their expressions were well drawn. But the uke looked in shock the whole time with his eyebrows up. Like the dude was on drugs the whole time.
I know it’s a short story. So I get the lack of attention to detail but it felt vain and of bad quality when there are short stories out there that are a lot more fun or interesting to read. Take the fallen lamb as an example.
Nanjo likes Mokyeon. But he’s not used to follow his desires. Since he’s a chaebol and all. He has to maintain certain perfect image. That’s why he pushed away Mokyeon when Sunhwa opened the door. Because he doesn’t want him to see his flaws. But he feels more himself, more comfortable with his desires, with Mokyeon. He’s been more faithful to Mokyeon than he’s ever been to Sunhwa.
Maybe he hasn’t been planning to snatch Mok from the beginning, but what I thought was true. He actually likes and feels more attracted to Mok. Sunhwa was just the door to his true sexuality. And since Sunhwa plays the innocent little girl, he felt Sunhwa wasn’t gonna demand too much from him, emotionally and sexually speaking. That’s why he’s in denial regarding Sunhwa’s true personality. Because that means that he has to accept that he was wrong and that the one he actually desires is Mokyeon.
I don’t even know what’s gonna happen for the next and final chapter of season one. I’m guessing Mok will actually penetrate him. Since Mok realized Nanjo has been more faithful to him than Sunhwa and he also responded the kiss so willingly even while Sunhwa was in the next room. Mokyeon now knows Nanjo also desires him. There’s no way he’s gonna back off now.
I can’t wait for Nanjo’s pov and too se how Sunhwa will exit this relationship once he finds out Mok and Nanjo like and desire each other!
This is the type of wholesome story that people who dislike good plot development love I guess? It was a cute story to read when there’s nothing else to read but it’s boring. This is when you write a trope and not a plot. The trope is omegaverse. Therese sex and a baby. That’s it. There was no room for development or improvement because the characters immediately talked things out. This is why most author don’t use communication when writing stories. Because they’re boring like this and it doesn’t give room for any kind of plot development. Definitely the type of story most moralists would enjoy though since there’s nothing to marinate and talk about.
Lord help me. I cannot wait a week for this story. I know Narim promised that Mokyeon wouldn’t sleep with Sunhwa again, but having Mok ask Sunhwa to spend the night with him almost gave me a heart attack. If it wasn’t because Narim is trying to make us hate Sunhwa less, they would have slept together again! The plot saved us. But then again they’re gonna have a threesome again. How is that not Mok sleeping with Sunhwa again? Unless this time Nanjo and Sunhwa start with the sex, so Mokyeon can prove to Nanjo that Sunhwa has been manipulating him into having rough sex and then Mok can’t take it anymore and shit hits the fan by either Mok trying to take Nanjo bc he can’t stand seeing him having sex with someone else or by storming out of the room.
Idk maaaaan I’m desperate. I need Nanjo’s pov too. I guess will have to wait for season two for that
This is one of those moments I love the Spanish fandom so much. We all rooting and loving Mokyeon while the English fandom is always trashing on the tops for whatever reason. Is Mokyeon a saint? Of course not. Is Nanjo a saint? Of course not. Let’s not talk about the twink. Full trash.
There are only three chapters left for the end of season one. So I’m guessing we’re either getting Nanjo’s pov or Mokyeon lose it and sleeping around after giving up on Nanjo.
He loves him. That’s why he broke things off with him. Because he doesn’t want to give into his sadistic tendencies with him. Nanjo is not just a hole for him. He’s in love with him.
Family? My brother in Christ, you came to the conclusion that you both are family? This poor dude never had a proper demonstration of what a real relationship between two lovers or family is like. He has a distorted twisted view of life. He was doomed to be a masochist because what he needed was therapy. Readers didn’t even need to romanticize this. The bottom did it himself. I’m used to reading twisted stories and they tend to be my favorites. But in those twisted stories the bottoms are always aware that they’re as fucked yo as the tops. This dude went and said “I know this is wrong but we’re family so it’s okay” whaaaat? Stupid fucakss bottoms like this that act all sweet and lovable in a red flag twisted relationship piss me off so bad brooooo
This story should have been uploaded on the other website so people could comment free of the moralist spreading their agenda in EVERY SINGLE chapter.
It’s funny how they say “I’m not easily shocked, I’ve read some fucked up things”
You haven’t. If you think this is horrifying, you need to spend a day on the other website or just stick to your vanilla wholesome shit.
End of the announcement.
Mokyeon hold it broooo I got you, from right here. I know Nanjo loves you and he realized that you treat him differently to how you treat Sunhwa. I know Nanjo realized you cooked seafood just for him. I’m gonna cry the twink is finally fading away bc Nanjo ditched him on his birthday. I think Nanjo is using the contract as an excuse to keep them separated. Nobody is gonna convince me otherwise. Nanjo likes Mokyeon. But he never thought he could become Mokyeon’s type so he has to go through all the trouble of pretending to be in love with Sunhwa in order to keep Mokyeon’s attention on him. That’s why he brought up the contract. “If you don’t fulfill the contract and stay away from Sunhwa, I’m not going to sleep with you anymore” bc Nanjo probably thought that Mok was obsessed with Sunhwa. Aaaaaah my babieeeees please marry soon. But after a hundred chapters of making love please and thank you
People are so dumb istg. They had a ton shit of trigger warnings and here they are. All the wimps crying about it. About how this is fetishizing, about wanting the top to grow back and how the bottom is shitty. These people will fight anything just for the sake of being confrontational. Don’t y’all get tired. You’re not gonna change the world complaining on an illegal site about these topics. Go outside, touch some grass and join an ong or something.
BL manwha will never change bc it’s KOREAN and Koreans love and live for good looks. That’s what sells. That’s the main selling point in the industry. Creators and authors have said this themselves. They’re never looking to be insightful or deep serious about matters of the world with BOYS LOVE bc BL is a fetish for straight people. The fact that some of us queer people read it doesn’t mean the at have to cater to our need for representation. If you need representation of real life go and protest or something. BL, yaoi, is about entertainment not advocating. Now get your heads out of your asses and let people have something. Smh.
And ended up being a trashy Stockholm Syndrome case. Not even a properly developed one at that. A mushy mess in between “you’re my pray and you’re everything to me.” It was so badly written it feels cringe. I love dark stories and red/black flag characters. Both uke and seme. But in this case it’s almost like they tried to give feelings unsuitable for the boss’ character. Idk. This story rubs me the wrong way bc I feel they killed a proper dark trope with bad writing and development. Like Sagold tried to do it killing stalking style but the bar was too high. Absolute disaster
I forget the twink exists
Now we’re about to see a switch up on Mokyeon. Let’s remember he’s not used to feelings. So he’s probably not gonna have an adequate response to jealousy. He’s not familiar with it. So who knows how he might react. He could turn cold on Nanjo or go impotent in the next threesome.
Also, did yall know the amount of details Nanjo knows about Mokyeon? Yup. Nobody will convince me Nanjo is not into Mokyeon. I’m sure he was the target this whole time.
We’re so close to the end of the season I don’t want to I barely have two other manwha ongoing that I’m reading all the others are on season break or hiatus I wanna cry
I love this proportions. They’re so insane. I love it when dicks are not accurately realistic. This is why I read yaoi. For the fantasy of it. The more unrealistic the better for me lmaoooo
Gojo, what are you doing here lmaoooo
Well for those excited about a second side story I’m sorry but this couple has only two chapters of story and SPOILER
It ends with Schuman agreeing to a relationship with Noel as long as Noel pays him for his time. So he becomes Noel’s prostitute lmaooooo
This story is so unserious altogether it’s comedic
Someone said we can read it on webtoon for free. Does anybody have the link? Because I like the art of this story but the pace is a mess. I don’t know if these are the actual chapters
I love the uncensored versions!!! Feels like I’m back at old good yaoi from ten years ago where teams used to spend time uncensoring dicks for the enjoyment of all of us!
The bottom is the coyote!!!
I just realized after seeing the tags for this story!
Time to let it marinate. The pace is super slow so I’m guessing this is a short story or it will need at least 30 chapters to see more of it since they’ve barely talked to each other in these past four chapters.
It’s truly sad that people lack the ability to assess a story and its quality bc they get stuck in the rape. It’s almost like the victim mentality transcends any ability to make a reasonable decent critic towards a piece of fiction. I’m glad there is a huge public out there who was indeed capable to understand the story and the way their love works.
It’s a relieve that the author and artist both left no room for doubt about the fact that indeed in the end they were meant to save each other for whatever definition they had for love.
One of my favorite pieces indeed. It navigates the human mind under extreme environments with a completely different set of morals.
I need the raws!!! I can’t wait any more this is the kind of shit I enjoy the most!!!! MOOOOREEEE