Where was this?! This is so good and entertaining. I love how every single character walks the morally grey and ambiguous path. They're all assholish in different ways. This is an entertaining story if you put your morals aside for once and read it as a comedy. I’m having so much fun I can’t believe I took so long to pick it up!
Idk about this one. I feel the author wanted to create an omega top x alpha bottom story but didn’t know how so they’re twisting and jumping through hoops to make something out of it?
I’m not against omega top x alpha bottom. But when authors write this dynamic, the thing that makes sense the most is that the alpha willingly wants to bottom for the omega. He’s still an Alpha but he desires the penetration. But in this story the alpha reacts and acts like an omega. He’s weaker and fragile while in rut while the omega seems nonchalant and unaffected. Like when the omega was in heat, he was stroking himself instead of fingering himself. I feel the author couldn’t properly make a story with a top omega and put all the normal and usual characteristics of alpha and omega and reversed the gender names. Because the top is acting and behaving like an alpha and the bottom is acting and behaving like an omega, pheromones wise. So the reverse genders lose their meanings.
Switch their genders and this is a regular alpha x omega story.
The only thing the author did, was keep mentioning that the top is an omega and the bottom is an alpha. In name only, because it feels and reads as a regular omegaverse.
I’m not entirely bothered though. I wish this would have been written as a power bottom omega and submissive alpha. But since I like the body proportions of the characters, I’ll keep reading.
I’m trying not to focus too much on the sex scenes because of the anatomy. So tired of authors drawing the anus like a vagina. Everything from the shape to the position tells you the author is drawing a vagina. I’m used to bad anatomy in yaoi/BL. But when the authors so openly draw the asshole in the place and shape of a vagina it throws me off so bad.
I love the art style. I love that the bottom is not a weak meek crybaby. So, it would have been perfect that his body looked like a normal slim man and not like a flat chested woman with a dick.
But oh well, there’s barely any good stories going around lately. So, I’ll take what I’m given.
Yeah. I waited till season one was completed to read this story and I’m glad the author brought it up in the note. I noticed how this story is softer and more fluffier and less dramatic than others from this author. Giving the set up it’s been created, I thought we would have more angst. I’m guessing Adam overmedicated in the past to the point he lost his sight and Eve accidentally injured his leg. So, Eve couldn’t forgive himself and due to guilt ( a new extremely heavy emotion) he decided to erase Adam from his memories because he realized his love for Adam was the thing pushing Adam to the edge so he might have thought “if I don’t love Adam, he will be able to have a normal life.”
I like the story. Brothers without a tomorrow never fails. However, I wouldn’t put it at the top three of my favorite story by brothers without a tomorrow. They have more complex and dramatic stories than this one. Dear zero feels somehow plain compared to the others.
When are people going to understand that not all male x male stories out here are about love. This is not a romance. This is a story about revenge. So it’s meant to make you feel extremely uncomfortable.
The characters do not love or like each other. And they never will. And even if they did in the end, it will be a response to all the trauma they both have been through.
Comments like “what the fuck” “this is so messed up” are so nothing and unnecessary. I thought we all had criteria to read stories
Why can’t we have more bottoms like this! I am crying I’ve been starving for this type of dynamic
You know how people always victimize bottoms saying they deserve better, that the tops are trash, etc etc. Yeah. Some of them cannot be defended. Some bottoms simply like violence and are natural masochists. I don’t wanna hear “it’s a trauma response” I don’t care. Being traumatized doesn’t give you the right to put that responsibility on everybody around you. There’s a point where you have to be held accountable for your actions. And that’s what I think this author did with this.
After learning what happened and what the bottom did to the top in the past, I absolutely support his fucked up ways. The bottom deserves everything that’s happening to him and more. Revenge here we go!!
I hit the jackpot. This thing is so good it has me on the edge of my seat waiting for more updates!
Hate the uke but will see this through because of the seme. I’m here to see the mf fall from grace and get a taste of his own medicine lmaooooo
The bottom is so f annoying i can’t stand his panels anymore. He’s angry and violent 9.9 out of 10 times. I want to see more of the top! Bro is freaking insane and I can’t wait to see more of him lmaooo
This is truly making my holiday season.
Mc is so annoying, sensitive, temperamental and violent. I’m here for the sadistic beauty seme to ruin his life lmaooooo let’s goooooo!
The pretty one is the seme omg thank god
I’m so excited for the new story!!
I’ve been looking for more of this type of BL since all the others are done or finishing
I’m crying of happiness knowing the pretty one is the seme!!!
Let’s gooooooo!
I had to touch some grass because ain’t no way this plot is this stupid.
And I’m sorry but what do you mean you need training for driving if you already have your driver’s license? My brother in Christ how are you so stupid? You’re gonna be a driver. Just drive.
As much of an asshole the top is, I’m seriously wondering what he sees in the bottom to be this obsessed because the bottom is pure stupidity. He has no redeeming qualities. This whole thing is embarrassing at best. I cannot continue to read this even if you pay me to. I’m done.
I must say that it’s difficult to find toxic stories where both characters are equally toxic, bad, perpetrators and victims all at the same time.
They matched each other in the most insane ways. Even in their zero emotional intelligence. I’ve never read a story where the characters had no self awareness at all of their own feelings or stretched the miscommunication on purpose. It was a well rounded story where you can see what not having emotional intelligence, lack of self awareness and honesty can do to two people who actually love each other deeply from the very beginning. They’re gonna have to work around their mistrust their whole relationship because that’s the consequences of their actions. But at least they’re both aware of it and they’re both willing to work on it together.
At least I won’t have to put up with those annoying notes anymore.
The translator spent the who story trying to advocate and arrogantly pretending they’re a better writer than the author. You gotta have some nerve to be plugging your fanfic in every single chapter of this story. The nerve to think you are a better writer than the original? Writing a story with 79 parts and still incapable to wrap it up?
Writing wholesome things and extra long stories doesn’t make you a good writer.
Every single person bashing this story for being toxic didn’t understand a single thing. This story was never about making amends, or character development. But y’all were so deep in your victim mentality that you didn’t have any maturity or brains to understand the underlying messages of the story.
Well, I’m glad the author is coming out with another story where it seems the bottom is the abusive one. More to enjoy. I hope the infant readers leave the writer alone though.
I’m all for development and protecting the victim. But my dude right here is just stupid. Like I need to hold him accountable bc ain’t no way a victim is this stupid. No. This is just bad writing. I picked up this story again hoping for some development and 30 chapters later NOTHING has changed. I cannot. Dropping it again lmaoo